Journal #6: Their Eyes Were Watching God

The person who read my pastiche on Friday said that I had strong dialogue that was easy to read but I needed to resolve my story better. She also said I did not explain a few things. I went through and specified certain areas that were shady. I also changed my ending so it would flow better and make sense with my theme. I also changed some descriptive words that changed the mood, for example, I changed "light blue couch" to "grey couch" to change the mood from sad to confusing because that is how the character is feeling. I feel much better about my pastiche now.